Point Me At The Sky
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Beautiful: page 4
Blitzkrieg1701 onKeep searching, bug boy! Don't give up!
In retrospect, I kind of regret piling on all this narration. I wanted to flesh out the character's personality this time, and since he shows up alone I figured this internal monologue was the only way to do it. Problem is, it's just not that satisfying to read. If someone ELSE had been drawing this, I'd suggest that person should have bit the bullet and drawn the extra 8 to 10 pages it would have taken to flesh out all this personality visually. After all, it's always more satisfying to SEE something rather than be TOLD it. Sadly, I AM the one drawing it, and my laziness has already been established, so no 8 to 10 extra pages :(
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