Pokemon Adventures Through the Insane Region of Hoenn

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#1 Leave...the box...ALONE!!!
Frost Knight onOk, basically, this just shows Zoey whining about moving, and seeing a rumbling box.
Before anyone asks, around the box is a pshycic effect(or so I hope) made with a paint.net. If you have any tips to make it better, please tell me.
Tell me what you think,rate,etc.
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must know whats in box!
Supah Sonic at
thats just……funny
Snowninja at
Awesome first page! You are very good with sprite comics!
Frost Knight at
Thanks!^^ And I'll read it straight away!
reddragon142 at
i forgot to say, but if you need any help fell free to ask, i just don't use paint.net so i cant help you with that so just PQ me if you need anything, and if you want too read my comic, i updated it yesterday ^^
Frost Knight at
Thanks!^^ And yeah,maybe it wasn't a good idea to make the outlines on the letters, and making Groudon getting married with a Kyogre.^^;
And don't worry, I'll improve(or so I hope).
reddragon142 at
not that bad for a beginer, atleast this page is alot better than the cover, the cover really needs to be revamped so i'll give you a 5 and fav this ^^ try to improve