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02: Going Away

02: Going Away

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I like this page alot better than the last one!!
Caz is the more of the proud and bold type.

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  • JC3 at

    pdn?

  • DarkSpark at

    i use pdn to make it dark

  • JC3 at

    k thanks for the advice but 200x?

  • xaxelx at

    Goddamn, the criticism; I remember my first time being criticized… It was by Kevin… v_v

    But here's my pinch of advice since you're a paint user.

    Never, well, barely, make small, normal sized sprite panels. Use 200x at them most, so that if you put a pokemon nearby, it'll look smaller and not be a Pidgey the size of a 500 foot tall tree. Then, Put effort into text bubbles. I suggest you pre-type the text you make on a separate white background, so that when you move it over into the actual text bubble colors don't fade (much). You have to make a clear bubble first, and make a tail aimed as much to the mouth as possible, and erase the lines that reveal the original bubble's border, to make a perfect text bubble (or anything close to that).

    And, slow down on the story. Take time with grammar, and refrain from using 'wtf!!!'
    Make sure text does NOT touch the borders. That is all. 3, for now.

    'I won't be so nice later!'.

  • JC3 at

    idk if i can make the trainers bigger or the pokemon smaller. but i will try to make this the best comic ever!!!!

  • JC3 at

    What did i ignore? i added the border

  • xVegitox at

    Did you completely ignore my advice from yesterday? C'mon I actually gave you some good advice.

    UH WHY ARE YOU PANELS SO FAR? Make them come closer ok?

    Um, the story just JUMPED, I am completely lost on what just happened I mean you have got to slow down. All of a sudden ash is battling everybody?

    The font is good, but I think its too bold. And uh yea, you should really get rid of that horrid blue color.

  • JC3 at

    should i change the banner?

  • JC3 at

    okay

  • Rich at

    Well, you generally want to avoid colored font. It's rather unappealing to look at and is rather unprofessional.


    The framing? It's TOO thick. I wouldn't go any thicker than say, 30 pixels generally. And you're going to want a darker color. Bright colors move to the forefront and make you comic seem sunken in. Use dark colors and your panels seem to pop out more.

  • JC3 at

    rong XD

  • JC3 at

    its my first comic and i need a frame. whats rong with the text?

  • Rich at

    Hey there. You know like, ignoring criticism? You know who does that?



    People who don't want to produce good things. Don't you want to produce good things?

  • Rich at

    "Hey guys, we'll just like, make the paneling REALLY thick, bright oversaturated blue, AND we'll make the text bright red. This is totally a good idea."

    No.

  • JC3 at

    okay i will make them smaller. i just used the original size as they came though.

  • DarkSpark at

    i only have one piece of advice cause ur actually preety good. dont stretch the pokemon if ur trainers are in the default size (as they are in ur comic)

  • reddragon142 at

    resize the trainers, because ur making his pokemons really big when they're supposed to be smaller than his trainer

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