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  DeeJayCee101 at 29 Apr, 2009, 04:47 PM

  LOLOLOLOLO
  
  i lol'd off my chair

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  Kxela at 17 Oct, 2006, 05:22 PM

  …I'd buy the game all over again if a NPC actually said that XD

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  xHeh at 10 Aug, 2006, 07:14 PM

  Oh… This current background is the gameboy… ooh that's big.

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  xHeh at 10 Aug, 2006, 07:11 PM

  @lefarce: That would be a helluva big Gameboy to hold that big comic.

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  lefarce at 10 Jul, 2006, 12:11 PM

  Awesome.

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  lefarce at 09 Jul, 2006, 11:37 AM

  Sigh…
  
  *fixes his shirt and looks at the ground a bit*
  
  You may have heard. I'm VERY harsh on sprite comics. So, if you would like a review, then here is one…
  
  The template is very bright. Harshly bright. Like, my eyes are going blind. Now, I know what your trying to do, replicate Pokemon Yellow. Thats cool and all, but there are better ways. Like a custom game boy template, where your comic could appear on the "screen" and the buttons on the gameboy could be the first, last, etc thing. I know that probably won't happen, as it would be a pain to code, but hey, it sounds cool. However, I'm not feelin' the yellow thing.
  
  The sprites are ok, but nothing more then that. Since they are gameboy sprites from Pokemon yellow, it's expected that they won't be great. But you could try to zoom in every now and then, and use different angles. The whole bird's eye view far shot thing is kinda' off. your word bubbles are ok, but try working on the pointers, as it's hard to tell who is saying what.
  
  The panels are very close to one another. Like, only mear pixels off. Try spacing them out a bit more. Use a comic template other then red, as it doesn't mesh well with the yellow on your page.
  
  Your title banner is just fine, I actually like it.
  
  The story and writing… The writing is ok, but nothing really grabs you. It's writen well, but it doesn't have a level of emotion. Your grammer is good, you cap the right letters, and I thank you for that. Not many sprite comics have good grammer.
  
  Over all, this is about average. You have allot to work on, but I have no doubt you can. Please fix the template, thats my biggest problem with this, it's blinding me.
  
  Art - 0/5 (it's sprites, there is no real art)
  Story - 2/5 (Falls flat, no emotion)
  Writing - 4/5 (however, your grammer is good)
  Template - 0/5 (my eyes… burning!)
  Overall - 2/5 (needs some TLC, but otherwise, your getting there.)

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  AdHocFerox at 06 Jul, 2006, 09:25 PM

  awesome

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  The mediocre one at 06 Jul, 2006, 03:49 PM

  Nozo has ADHD dosn't he?