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Comic #87 The First Gym Match Victory!

MysteriousJeff

on Aug. 9, 2009

Even in the face of victory, I feel that Nozo doesn't like getting wet.

Maybe he can't hold his breath that well?

The yellow narration boxes have changed. For one, they're no longer Yellow. Plus, a member of the 7-Spade forum could've viewed this update a day early, but enough about that, let's get to the fun parts where I nitpick over my own comic.

Well, this is the first page in a while that DOESN'T use copy/paste, so there's an accomplishment. I also love how the last panel turned out, especially with the water dripping off Nozo and the text placement. I may make that into a wallpaper later. Something looks off about the Starmie partially in the water effect in panel 1, but I can't quite put my finger on how to describe it. And somehow I feel there's an anatomical mistake in the way Bklcbkl's legs are positioned.

By the way, Red is NOT the color of Nozo's eyes in panel 3(I used Burgundy, which is more Brownish). If you like oranges, then the new pages of POKETTO MONSUTAA EX ADVENTURE will be the thing for you! That's all for now! See you next time Pokémon Yellow Comics updates!