Prelude

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We All Go Down/Natural High

AdHocFerox

on Aug. 13, 2006

And so the journey of commitment begins with a single kept promise.

I have committed to a schedule. Prelude will update MWF (CV Tue (or more), KaH Thur (seriously)).

So far, so good with the whole schedule thing… :)




Now to comment on today’s page…

First let's look at the big picture. This story arc is defiantly going to be the biggest one yet. Technically I'm behind schedule according to the back of the napkin where I outlined it. If you view this part as Act One it's been lengthened considerably. I estimated being somewhere in the middle, or at least the start, of Act Two.

In truth I'm not to concerned with the length (Housd recently wrapped up an arc that lasted around 160 days) but rather my ability to keep things coherent… ya know, plot consistencies, limiting the amount of self-referencing material, etc.

What I'll probably do is read from the start of this story to here and gauge if the pace is good… see if I could follow it…



Now this page.

I was a bit tentative to have Wip go off on one of those socialist rants. I guess it came out ok (i.e. coherent). It feels like there’s a panel missing between the first and second ones. Gonna have to watch out for that.

The rest of the page… a little "eww" but in keeping with the Prelude sprit :)




Thanks for reading and continue to Rock On!