FROM THIS POINT, PAGE NUMBERING IS OFF, DUE TO THE BONUS SCENE. ALSO FROM THIS POINT ON, ALL GERMAN HAS BEEN EDITED AFTER PRINT.
PAGE TEN (Seven Panels)
�The next two pages are a dream sequence that will resolve on page twelve. However, build up the action in these pages as if you�re just continuing on with the story. I want this to go eventually from normal to freaky, with a bit of surrealism to it. What would really be cool is to foreshadow the worlds of each character NICK emulates as he leaves his own time period and travels into the others�. Special note: In this dream sequence, always keep NICK�S face a constant; even if he �becomes BLU,� for example, give him female anatomy, but keep his face.�
� Also, feel free to hide the Quantum Sphere, in whole or in part, everywhere you�d like.
Panel 1. Medium shot. NICK has passed by the bum. The bum, a pretty repulsive one, has staggered to his feet, intent on following NICK. Make the bum disgusting, with a skin condition. Background begins to morph in to BILLY�S time period.
BUM: rrrhhrrr�
BUM: * BURP *
BUM: HEY BILLY…
BUM: GIMMIE A SHOT OF THAT WISKEY, WILL YA?
Panel 2. Another angle. The bum is still pursuing NICK, who has upped his pace to a jog. Background is still in BILLY�S time period. NICK�S clothing has changed slightly, more like BILLY�S, tattered and transient.
BUM: COME ON, BILLY. I�M AN APOCOLYPSE BABY, TOO.
NICK (Thought): GROSS.
Panel 3. Wide Shot. NICK running, closing on a group of rough looking contemporary Gangstas. Background could morph from BILLY�S world to BLU�S world. NICK�S appearance is still bum-like.
NICK (Thought): OH SWELL.
GANGSTA #1: WELL, LOOKIE WHAT WE GOT US HERE.
GANGSTA #2: �SUP?
Panel 4. Over the Shoulder Shot. Sleazy said gang is harassing NICK. Background of BLU�S world. NICK�S clothing is taking on a more feminine appearance.
GANGSTA #3: WHA YOU SAY, BABY?
GANGSTA #3: I GIVE YOU FIDDY DOLLA, YOU GIMMIE SOMMA THAT HOOCHIE?
NICK: HOOCHIE? I�M NOT–
Panel 5. Close shot. NICK is appalled to see he�s transformed into a hooker. The Thugs, now surrounding NICK, have all pulled out knives. Background, undertone of BLU�S world, morphing into STOLTZ�S.
NICK: HOLY SHIT!
GANGSTA#4 (OP): LET�S GET HER!
Panel 6. Wide Shot. The gangstas are transforming into a squadron of Nazis, and are in pursuit of NICK, who is now running for his (her) life. The soldier�s knives have become guns, and one of the Nazis is firing. Background, undertone of STOLTZ�S world.
NAZI #1 BETRUG!!
NICK: WHATAMINUTE–
NICK: –WEREN�T YOU GUYS GANSTA THUGS JUST A SECOND AGO?
Panel 7. Medium Shot. NICK, who is now wearing STOLTZ�S lab coat, has evaded the Nazis behind a wooden fence (or something). The Nazis are seen in the background somewhere running the wrong way. NICK is crouching/sitting on a bench, fearful for his life.
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