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Mesai_Taki onWORDS CANNOT DESCRIBE HOW MUCH I LOATHE THIS PAGE.
1) it could have been done in THREE PANELS, and I dragged it out. Nice.
2) FOURTH PANEL IS CONFUSING AS ANYTHING.
3) I can't draw action.
5) The fifth panel is… is… oh, don't get me started.
At least the robot is still creepy, if incredibly hard to SEE HALF OF THE TIME!
GAH.
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