Random Experiment Number 1

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Crimson

Shegufta

on Oct. 8, 2009

A bi-weekly experiment of styles, layout, technique, concepts, and random goodness. Any and all critique will be wholeheartedly appreciated by this young amateur artist.
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Charachter Concept
No concrete story-line as of yet
Thinking of using Primary colors and shades of primary colors.
Sci fi/fantasy theme most likely?

Enlarged for detail view
http://sarahs0001.deviantart.com/art/Crimson-WIP-111061616

Name: Crimson (nickname/what most know her as), full name is Artemis Daemon Mementomorris
Age:22
Appearance:
-Blue hair, blond tufts/streaks in random placed
-olive skin
-black midriff shirt
-black skinny jeans
-combat boots
-green/black striped gloves
-yellow/red eyes (hence the nickname crimson, which also refers to her personality and fighting style) - her red eyes come from a genetic disorder in which melanin is not produced in her iris's cells
usually this affects the whole body and creates albinism, but she's an odd one.
Description: Growing up she was a diabolically vicious. Never let her guard down and had severe anger and emotional management disorders (. As a better output for her energy, they sent her to a martial arts academy, where she was highly decorated for her skills in all feilds, but mostly in close combat and kickboxing. Her true passion was wielding a gun, all kinds, and especially with the new line of plasma weapons recently released by the military.
She lives fast and likes to have a lot of control over her own life.

Weapons: Plasma pistol on her at all times, a Dragunov SVD, a MK16, a switchblade, box cutter
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So, I need critique on layout and stuff
In most combat scenarios she'll be wearing more clothes
I just wanted to show off her six-pack of Doom
Obvious stuff i know i need to work on
Body shapy/size/proportion
more action poses (realistic and non)