Yeah, agree with Nickguy. IMO the last panel could have done without that word, and instead just add the shivering squigglies to the woman's hand indicating that she's clenching so hard her hand's shaking a bit.
Aside from that, I like the entire atmosphere buildup from page 1 to now. Feels like a play.
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gorgeous
miosamey at
i don't think this one belongs on drunkduck… shouldn't i be flipping through this at the graphic novel section of a bookstore?
darkwaterfrey at
Beautiful eyes and faces!
repoman at
Awesome art.
JillyFoo at
That is so sexy! I love you!
Tantz_Aerine at
This is a breathtaking, amazing piece of work from you! I can't wait to see more!
Definitely fav'ed! Wow!
Hanzou at
Please continue this epic.
Nergal at
great expressions. this comic is amazing.
mlai at
Ooh, stealth edit!!
The new edited page looks great. Panel 3 especially.
Tashna at
I love your artwork to death ;w;
mlai at
Yeah, agree with Nickguy. IMO the last panel could have done without that word, and instead just add the shivering squigglies to the woman's hand indicating that she's clenching so hard her hand's shaking a bit.
Aside from that, I like the entire atmosphere buildup from page 1 to now. Feels like a play.
NickGuy at
pretty…but man oh man does that sound effect font in the last panel kill the mood.
TheMidge28 at
the rendering of the soldiers face is quite excellent
Emily Elizabeth at
Soooo beautiful!
Shewolf2 at
Amazing shades and details!
rana at
your fantastic, you really understand the human figure: )
BMR at
Love the faces, excellent detail.
bishounen1012 at
nice!
lookin for the truth at
wow!!!!!!! ur awesome !!! i looove ur 3 comics the rock!
Hugo Maximo at
Faved
Fenn at
zomg, the details! So amazing.
Sei at
This page is absolutely gorgeous.