Remnants

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Page 03

Arcturus

on Aug. 12, 2007

This page is a bit of a mess, and I was very close to redoing it completely. I'd rather be doing new pages than redoing old ones, though. I think the problem is I devoted too much space on the page to the wrong point in time, ie. moving the staff between targets, which isn't that interesting to show. I should have concentrated on the explosions a bit more. Oh well.

So, that's all four watchtower guys shot down now. We also finally get a name for our green-haired friend here. I'm not into revealing the characters' names right away because people generally don't say eachother's names all the time. Also with the last frame I've established a sort of comradery between the two attacking psionicists, which is built upon in a scene later on.

Thankfully, the pages get a bit better from here on out. Hooray!