Remnants
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Arcturus onFinal year exams were causing me to gnaw on my own nervous system while doing this page, so its probably not my best work.
I know I didn't actually show Samantha being reckless and getting injured. Perhaps I should have done? Anyway, just assume she wasn't concentrating and stepped out of Ashley's shield area or something. I was just trying to show their personalities with this scene. It was going to have an extra page of this too, but I felt it was just labouring the point a bit. Yeah ok, Ashley's a bit of a nagging type person, and Samantha is a bit of a loose cannon sometimes, WE GET IT.
Dialogue could be better in this page since I had to combine two pages into one and it was fiendishly tricky.
The inside of the building looks a bit bare. It's supposed to, it's not been fully built yet. They just recently found that temple down there and quickly whacked up some stuff to attempt to keep it somewhat secure from other factions. Clearly didn't work too well.
So yeah.
FLASH VERSION: http://remnants.lazyilluminati.com/comic/flashpage/16
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