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Rival Angels Page 330-UltraDragon

albone

on Feb. 4, 2010

They still have a long way to go, but it's a great step forward. First of all, they were able to fend off Hell's Belles but there's some consequences here still. We don't know what's in store for Sun for going off the Damage Inc reservation but expect a reaction from Yvonne and Damage Inc. Chloe might be gone for now, but she's a very vindictive woman who never forgives and always evens up every score which isn't good for Sabrina or Sun. But for now, Sabrina and Sun have more than their individual victories to celebrate.

This particular scene was supposed to end two weeks ago immediately after the match where Sabrina called out Chloe. While in Baltimore last year, I ran the next scene by Artist Alley neighbor Lora Innes to see what she thought. It's not that she didn't like the end of this scene but thought that the next scene needed better buildup (paraphrasing a LOT). After giving it some thought, I came up with this ending and I think it was so much better to end it with this. Thanks again, Lora!!!

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