Robot Wars

Issue Seven page 7--A necessary course of action

on Oct. 12, 2008

On this page the mysterious voice is in full control. Poor Dave… I wonder how he got in this mess?!? I revised this page a bit. When I did this page I sort of conjured Dave out of thin air, thinking he wasn't particularly important–one of the 'red shirts' of the original Star Trek–dead men walking so to speak. But somewhere around page fifteen or sixteen, it hit me just who exactly Dave HAD to be. Once that epiphany occurred, all my missing pieces fell into place. Now I really didn't have to revise this page. The dialog as it was, still fit the profile…but I believe in giving the reader a fair (fairer?) shake, so I added five small bits which will really make you spin when you get a bit further a long and you suddenly know WHO Dave is also!!! Enjoy!

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