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Siph Roseflame

on Aug. 20, 2008

I'm extremely sorry I haven't gotten any pages up in the last few months. I will do my best to return to a more regular schedule with updates at least every two weeks, if not sooner.

Anyway…I like some things about this page and dislike other things. The first panel is a little annoying, maybe it has something to do with the way I blurred things. I like Felam's face in the last panel, I worked for quite a while to get it to look the way I wanted it to (I still don't think it's quite there, though). In case you hadn't figured it out, Felam transformed and jumped out of the car's way, but somehow managed to land on top of the car.