Author notes

Chapter 14 - Page 11

DAJB

on Nov. 22, 2009

Ideally, I'd have liked another half page or so to get all this dialogue in. Faced with a choice of spreading it over two pages or squeezing it into one, I chose one. As a result, the dialogue in the final panels crowds the artwork more than I would have liked. Ah well … I know I wouldn't have been happy with the pacing if I'd spread it over two pages so, on balance, I think this is probably the lesser of the two evils. Just about!

Okay, that's it. End of chapter and the scene is all set for our big finale(s). Meet us back here next week as we start our charge towards the finish line!