Shades of Gray

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133 - He finally gets to the point

avsaroke

on Feb. 3, 2010

Oh no! Kiva's fate somehow wound up in Ten's hands! Gasp and drama!

For the first time in a while, I went back and reread my entire comic. Sometimes, working from page to page like I do without a script and only a general overall sense of where this is all going, I lose track of what should be going on. And you know what I realized? These last dozen or so pages came out kind of jumbled and way too serious for this early on in the story. (I also noticed reader comments dropped off a lot once I started advancing the plot too fast.) So… oops. XD

Anyway, I'm just letting y'all know I'll be wrapping up this little story arc in a few more pages, and then it's back to Ten's nonsensical, wacky adventures. Perhaps we'll meet some new characters or get to know some of the pre-existing ones a bit better. If you've got anyone you really want to know more about, let me know!