Shades of Gray

Author notes

160 - Mulish

avsaroke

on Oct. 13, 2010

I didn't have a chance to work it into the dialogue, but Tatith dragged his whole class to an old, disused buiding in an attempt to make himself scarce. Unfortunately for him, he's not as good at hiding as Tattle is at finding people.

Also, two quick notes:

1) Back on page 056 I said that Tatith and Tattle were equals onboard the academy. I've revised that. Tattle outranks Tatith by a step.

If you're curious about how the ranks/chain of command works, I'm slowly compiling some background material on my DA page. You can view the chart here:
http://avsaroke.deviantart.com/#/d30plrf
(anyone know how to make that clickable? I suck at this sort of thing.)

2) I changed a word on page 054. I didn't entirely think the military stuff through when I was writing that page's dialogue. "Military" has been changed to "Army" (ie. now the Altair Academy is included in the military, whereas the previous dialoge implied it wasn't.) It's not important to the plot, just a minor detail that bugged me.