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Chapter 3: The kindness of strangers, Page 59

Dark Pascual

on Nov. 12, 2009

The old "Gun vs Sword" debate…

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Have to admit that, to this date, this is the page that I'm the least satisfied with.

While the panels look good, I'm not sure if the flow of the action is clear enough.

Have to admit that I'm kinda conservative about the layout and arrengement of the panels, since I think that I can pull actions clear enough with 6-to-9 square panels per page, and don't think that I could pull a more creative layout without sacrificing some clarity in the pace…

If somebody have any suggestions about the subject, or find the layout boring and unninventive, please, feel free to comment with advices and suggestions. Highly apreciated…

Ok, that's it for the week. Hope that you had a great week and that you enjoy your weekend.

Enjoy the page and CYA on Monday.

Thanks to Warpedwenger for reading proof.