Four things: One: Where'd you get the card thing for your avvie? Two: I suggest you put a little more work into the sprites. Right now they're basic re-colors. Three: It seems a bit rushed. You could've kept Skorch out of it for a comic or two. Four: The names are too simple. Comic then add "O" Sprite then trade the "e" for "on" And Skorch is a different spelling of Scorch.
Don't worry! It has alot of potential since it's just beggining!
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Aweosme comic!
is manegg gonna be in this one? he was the best in comico!!!
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Four things:
One: Where'd you get the card thing for your avvie?
Two: I suggest you put a little more work into the sprites. Right now they're basic re-colors.
Three: It seems a bit rushed. You could've kept Skorch out of it for a comic or two.
Four: The names are too simple. Comic then add "O"
Sprite then trade the "e" for "on"
And Skorch is a different spelling of Scorch.
Don't worry! It has alot of potential since it's just beggining!