Spirits Magic
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yadiel on=D I think that with this page I really started improveing, I added some more shadows, and the side views I think I made them better.
Tha bad guys make an appearance =D. Little by little we will be hearing bits of whats going on, what happened, and why, for now, at least the first 3 chapters won't be so serious, not the the story will take an angs theme, but there should be more action from chapter 3 to the end. =D
By the way, if you got any critiq, or thing the page deserves a lower grade than 5, go ahead, I really want to improve, but for that I need your help =D, also there are some past pages without grades or comments, you could give them a crit to =D
Have fun and thx for reading.
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