Stain on The Nation
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2. Introduction Part 2
ParkerFarker onThis concludes the introduction to the city. I liked the intro, it was a measly two pages, but I feel it gave an accurate portrayal of the city. I originally had the kid with the brown hair blonde, but it made the colour palette of the page off, so I changed it to brown. That's why he looks a bit gingery. I was also going to change his green shirt to some other colour for the same reason, but it looked fine with just the one change.
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