Stain on The Nation
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Chapter One: How it Began
ParkerFarker onChapter One, ten years prior to the intro. I reckon it goes better if you read the page before, and then this page. Then it's like "blah blah blah, ten years ago none of this would've happened blah blah blah" and then we flash back to ten years ago.
I like this page, the girl's hand is a bit small but it's not that noticeable. I also edited the white words. I made them whiter. You might not be able to tell.
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