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page one color

Z74

on Oct. 31, 2015

I have been working on some revisions/ improvements to the comic, I really wanted to thank the people who pointed out some areas where I could improve. I have revised some of these first pages correcting things like dialogue balloons , not enough dialogue ,spelling mistakes, and the inhumanly tiny waist I put on Ace on the previous page ( I don't know how I missed that one ) .

This is my first shot at coloring , please let me know what you think about it . I wanted to keep the old style feel with the coloring . Again thanks to those who have given me honest criticism , I really appreciate it - it helps me improve as an artist !

If the color enhances the art I will post the revised pages and the next page in color as well , if you think the b&w version is better I will stick with that . Thanks for checking this out !