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Chapter 1: Page 22

StopWatchers

on Oct. 18, 2017

I think this may be my favorite page in Chapter 1. There’s just so much happening! I hope I captured how hectic this short span of time was supposed to be, and that it’s all happening very quickly. Probably all in just a matter of seconds. But I love how the page layout turned out, I’m happy with how all the characters look, the different angles offered up. I really believe this is one of the best pages I’ve produced thus far.

But what do you think? Do you agree? Could the page have been improved in some way? Let me know in the comments!