Sunstrike and Bluemist An Origin Story
Red Flag

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Red Flag

ShaRose49
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That’s not stalker-ish at all nope!

This scene is almost over, but since I don’t have anything else to say right now—how is everyone feeling about Xan?

I know some of you guys were saying that he didn’t seem like such a bad guy, but sometimes I think I might be making his motive(s) too obvious, but the fact that he’s a bad person was never supposed to be a big secret. I just wanna make sure nothing’s too “on the nose” you know? This is only my first story, so I’m sure there will be some mistakes (there already has been some), but with feedback and advice/criticism from my readers, (and maybe doing some more studying) I hope to continue to improve so that the episodes after the origin story will be even better!

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