Super Temps
So what now?

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So what now?

smkinoshita
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Yes, I'm still working slowly on finishing this last storyline. There were originally more scenes with Jackie Green, and it involved Hydro more as a result but given that 5 years have passed since my first draft it's natural for me to want to make some changes.

Jenny always did some to Skully's rescue but I believe in the original draft there was more drama around Psychadelchick and Hydromancer, with Hydro mentioning that he did forgive Psycha. He also mentions being unable to hit a girl, even in the scripted combat of the world of Super Temps – not even Jenny. This would have prompted the girls – who had just about settled their differences – to immediately get ready to scrap over him again. Or something to that effect.

However after stepping away from the story for so long and having some reflection, especially knowing what I do about what was going to happen in the planned future of Super Temps, I decided to go in a different direction.

Despite being a pain in the ass and scheming like Daffy Duck, Jenny has on multiple occasions shown she gets along better with Skully than anyone else. And due to the fact that physical pain makes her smart (and more intelligent overall) and her shoulder's still hurting pretty bad. So instead, I've decided that while she's still more intelligent, Jenny's had a little revelation about a few things, one of which that Skully treats her with the most respect out of anyone.

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