A lady that pretty gets hit on by almost every guy she meets. If she's got the integrity to work for a living instead of finding a sugar daddy, and to tell him flat out the answer is "no" instead of stringing him along, she's got _some_ moral fiber. Still: "we can still have these surf sessions…" a.k.a., "I won't date you, but I'll hang with you as long as I get free surfing lessons," yeah, that's a bit cold. Don't sell her short: who knows? She might build into a heck of a villianess down the line… ;)
My only recommendation would be to save the pages in a higher quality. There are a lot of jpeg noise in the pages which is a pity on the great artwork.
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The writing is good (though there is a typo in the top panel).
Gwalihir at
A lady that pretty gets hit on by almost every guy she meets. If she's got the integrity to work for a living instead of finding a sugar daddy, and to tell him flat out the answer is "no" instead of stringing him along, she's got _some_ moral fiber. Still: "we can still have these surf sessions…" a.k.a., "I won't date you, but I'll hang with you as long as I get free surfing lessons," yeah, that's a bit cold. Don't sell her short: who knows? She might build into a heck of a villianess down the line… ;)
Moondog at
Nice writing - he has a clear personal dilemma
VegaX at
God damnit man, this looks fantastic! :)
My only recommendation would be to save the pages in a higher quality. There are a lot of jpeg noise in the pages which is a pity on the great artwork.
riartha at
oh wow…beautiful art! :D im sticking around! :D
Bradleyo at
Wow! Thanks a lot you guys.
It means a lot to hear some solid feed back.
Sadly because of the day job this is a weekly series.
New pages go up Saturday mornings. (like cartoons!)
Again, some big things are comeing for our boy Wizer,
so be sure to come back and find out what.
Thanks again
~Brad
matts at
Way too cool man! Really!
Thanks for your words on my comic too!
Best
Matts
http://www.drunkduck.com/THE_RANCAT/index.php
dreamwatcher at
most excellent page, check out hawt babe at 6 o'clock. im faving this, can't wait to see the next page
albone at
Great looking art and cool start. She told him like it is, gotta admire honesty in a woman, unless she's shooting you down. Then its WAR. lol jk
I saw the same GI Joe as Amanda. :P
Bradleyo at
Hey Thanks guys for the kind words.
I'm so happy that people are checking it out and liking it so far.
Amanda is right again. Kora is a total snot.
Our boy Wizer has a lot to learn about the ladies.
Peace
~Brad
kyocat83 at
oh and I forgot to rate
kyocat83 at
Art's nice and story seems well planned, nice job. Lot's of good angles too, that's what I'm having trouble with.
Gudmunder at
Very nice. I love the art style. I think I'll be sticking around and see how this turns out. Very nice job.
amanda at
What a little snot. Also, water + lightning is bad…I saw it on GI Joe.