I suspect Hotaru may subscribe to the same school of thought as Dante (the son of Sparda, not the poet) on this one: "You're not going to shoot me, are you? If you do that… I'll die, you know?" "If that's what it'll take to shut you up. It bugs the crap out of me when someone talks more than I do."
Also, I just noticed I *totally forgot* to color in his vest in the last panel last page. Seriously. How the hell did I do that? Anyway, it's fixed now.
This page seems a little cluttered. But, I appreciate the positive criticism you guys gave me last time. I'll keep it in mind. Let it never be said that I don't listen to my fans. That panel with the, uh, dialogue… you know the one… that was fun to write. Cathartic. In my family, learning to swear like that is an art. (And personally? I just love the idea of Qingting leaping through the air acrobatically, laughing like a goddamn lunatic.)
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