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Part 1, Page 7

hansrickheit

on June 23, 2022

It's taking a lot of effort to resist tweaking the artwork. I drew these pages almost five years ago, and already these drawings look wrong and mutated to me, especially the girls' faces in the last panel.
In spite of this, my inclination is to leave the drawings as they are whenever possible. (However, there are definitely some panels in the next few pages that are getting some serious re-working!)