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Part 1, Page 16

hansrickheit

on July 25, 2022

I always liked this page, even if the proportions are a bit off. For this and the next few pages, I tried to indicate that the girls live in an enormous Victorian house situated in a very unlikely location - an unusually wide strip of land that runs between the two lanes of the highway.

My original title for the book was going to be "NYMPHS OF THE MEDIAN STRIP." Instead I opted for the current title of THE GLOAMING, because of its more atmospheric overtone. I may have to switch the title back when this book eventually sees print (in a few more years, most likely). There's already at least one other webcomic with the same name, and a tv show. Also, I fear that the Scottish origin of the word may skew people's interpretation of any "meaning" in this porno comic. These characters are all New Englanders, not Scottish!

I'm going to keep the title, THE GLOAMING, for the duration of this webcomic, but the time comes, I'll be open to any alternative title suggestions!