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Traitor: page 29

winzrella

on May 5, 2006

Finally back from USA and with a new page. I felt like using markers ^_^

I think the page is okay even thought the first panel could have more stuff in it, but the problem was that they aren't standing beside any buildings, trees and flowers so I just put in some kids and a woman ^^'

Hilarion looks big from this point of view. Maybe a bit too big in this picture, but he's not a small guy at all. He's tallest of the characters here and to come and he's not slender like Saturnin.

I like the two kids looking up in the upper right corner. They are cute!
The panel below was an experience with which I'm kinda happy. I should however made their hairs shine a bit, but it's too late :/

Thanks mina_lunga a LOT for you comment! I had relized that my pages were getting lighter, but It didn't occur to me that they could be bad for the comic. Kinda got blind to my own work. I darkened some of the page 26 and 28 and it felt like I had never finished them at all. However I hope they are a bit darker now and easier to read.

The panels will have great lines from now on and when this chapter is done I'm gonna change the lines to the rest of the pages as well.

If there is something in the pages like grammar/typing errors, too small text, the page is hard to see or something else just point it out.

I have updated the homesite of TOE and I'll get the link there up here somewhere *looks around*

See ya!