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Traitor: page 40

winzrella

on Dec. 19, 2006

The final page of chapter one and I hope I'm finally able to decide what kind of style I'm gonna use in the future chapters.

This page is nothing like what I originally planned. However, I think it's okay. I do like how the characters came out, but I'm not too sure do they really work well together. Some of the feeling I was aiming at in the page was lost when I replanned it (at least I think so). The most important things are shown in it anyway.

Everything but the text is done by using traditional means. I didn't do the speech pubble with computer either.

Tell me what you think. That will help me to decide how to work on the second chapter ;)