Taint of Exile
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Name: page 2

winzrella
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Here is page two of chapter 2 ^_^
I was experimenting with this one yet again, but generally it isn't much different from before. There are things I'm happy about like the tree in which the main character is in. The point of view of the tree was what I aimed to. The other character looking at the tree could be better.
Also, it's clear to me that the page is lacking things I'm not gonna mention. Because I'm still considering working on it more, but I don't know do I dare to toutch it anymore.

To those who haven't noticed before:
The cover of the chapter is replaced by something completely new so pleace check it out.
The is also the first page for the chapter if you haven't realized.

Now some answers to comment:
Bluebug: You answered my comment for Kurenai Mashin and you said I have improved. That's good to hear, you know ;) And yes I am still working on the comic even thought it took 2 years *couch* for me to finish the first chapter. I hope to work faster now. About the Christmas cards… I was wondering which on of the girls you mentioned to be pretty and at peace with herself? Just curious ^_^ I used to do more cards to people myself, but it has shrinked from more than ten to only 4-5 and those are only for my friends living outside Finland ^^' But I try to keep that going as long as possible.

Mina_lunga: Yes I'll stop apologicing as you told me in one of the filler arts :P And yes it was bad from me to use an old art for the cover, but it was a substitute untill the final one was finished. But now it is and it's something completely new ;)

Jenshin: Thanks for the comment. It really made me feel good and still do. Thought I think I'm using less time shading than you think ^^' And it's great that you interested to know. In chapter 3 we'll get to know more of the secrets behind the main character. There will be also hints in this chapter :P Your comic has been waiting for a long time on the list of comics that I are going to read, but I haven't found a peaceful moment to sit down and just enjoy it with out any hurry anywhere. I hope that moment will arrive soon, thought ;)

rmccool, ninja_jette, insanelysane, ingrid_nini: Thank you all for the fives and cheerful comments *hugs*

Oh, forgot to tell you. I got my driving license yesterday :D

Now, 'till next time ^_^
See ya!

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