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winzrella

on Sept. 28, 2008

And a new page!!
Don't know what to say about this really. However do not blame the soldiers of being stupid. They can't so anything about it when their creator is an idiot ^^'
With that I mean they should not be standing idly like that when there is five of them to beging with!! But however it is quite too late to change my plan for the chapter.

Three pages to go of which two are sketched of which the other one is half inked on my desk. The last page is still with out any sketching… That is because I'm still thinking that I might change the layout a bit.

Just like I changed the lay out of the last panel of this page at the last minute. The new layout is a lot better but at the same time was harder for mee to do. But when I keep in mind that I'm doing this to learn I will do hard things!

Viator was very cooperative while doing this page. He worked out quite well. I didn't have problems with the lineart on this page either which I did have with the two next pages ^^' I still can try to improve it while inking…

Anechan: Thank you very much. Glad you liked it and glad that you like the colors :)

Mina_lunga: The glaring guard… Maybe I did overdo with the glare because it was not meant to be a bad glare or anything. It was just ment to show that he has no change in his face despite the happy reunion. But as I said about, the soldiers can't help their idiocy because of me XD

Thank you for commenting on the Puusha-story. You named all the problems which I half realized, but at the same time couldn't completely grasp. Now it will be easier for me to think trough things before I redo that story. Because I WILL redo it at some point. And it will be the whole story and maybe it would also make more sense then.
My sister did the translation and I changed it slightly before doing the English pages. However it was not easy to translate. So a problem could be there.
The changing shades were a sign of frustration from me. I had already problems with my hands giving up, too little time and all the other little reasons I had. Mix them together and you get a very frustrated me ^^'
The outcome of it was that I didn't want to see the comic pages for many months. I were too unhappy with it. Now it has passed enough time for me to actually show it and accept good feedback :D