Yay, page ten! Okay. So the name changed. Anyway, now we know everybody's names. Not that "everybody" is many people. By the way, the Xeari in the comic is not the XeaRi that is me. Note the capital R in mine. I made the name for myself, then gave it to the dragon, and didn't have the heart to change either. XeaRi is not my real name, nor is it what the X in my initials (H.X.Y.L.) stands for. Just wanted to clear all that up. When Vark says "to talk to Her is more unusual" (yes, capital H), he means it's never happened before. He just doesn't say it outright. That's what he does. This is one of the worse drawn pages. I don't know why. Besides that, in the fourth panel Xeari's expression doesn't really fit. And I'm still bad at layout - both panels and text positioning. I mean, I have rough sketches of what the good copy will look like, but sometimes I change my mind and stuff. Curse indecision. (You'll notice I curse a lot of things. You'll also notice I change my mind a lot.) - XeaRi
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