I was afraid of not getting this page ready for today (Wednesday), but it's a very simple page with very little text. I drew Ciaran in both the second last and last panels because I was unsatisfied with the first time and was going to choose the best one to copy and paste. I chose the second. I also copy/pasted Leanael's eye (yep, just the one) at the top of those panels, so those two panels were very easy to do. I did however shade them separately.
I shrank the space between panels a bit (actually it's been that way a while now) because I find sometimes I don't have enough space in the panels themselves. I don't know how much this is going to help, but I suppose it will at least a bit. I also shrank the text some because it took a lot of space. I prefer this size a lot because it gives me more space and it's still easily readable. I could shrink it further, but I like it biggish anyway.
I was having issues with proportion in panel two. Ciaran, coming out of his shroud of darkness, has his left hand with his dagger (that's right, he's a leftie :D) drawn back and ready to strike. Since he just landed, his wings are spread and his tail out to help balance. Leanael, on the other hand, is turning around at Vark's cue, but not fast enough. Then in panel 4 Ciaran is sort-of-quickly backing away while Leanael turns fully, clutching her wound and glaring. Yay glare. I started questioning myself on which of her bangs goes on which side (one is longer than the other), but kept them consistent on this page at least. I'll check that later… ^.^'
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