*FIRST OF ALL: Check it out! I'm starting a new comic with BohemianCloud over on SmackJeeves. She's drawing (better than I do) and I'm writing (and colouring cover pages). We've put the first page up. It's so freaking awesome! The colours took me forever, which is why they're only for covers, but they make everything better. We should be posting soon.
This is the place I stopped on my first take of the comic. It's about here I realized there were too many plotholes and I couldn't fix them without redoing the whole thing. In take one of ToK, there were 16 pages before I decided it was no good. I've added stuff in and spread out the panels a bit more. That�s good, because I want this comic to be long. I�m not sure exactly how 16 pages turned into 38, but I�m good with it. :D Chapter one is 44 pages long, if I remember correctly.
Ack! I screwed this page up. The big thing is that Leanael should be draped over Vark's back in panel five. I noticed after shrinking the page to web size and after doing a whole load of stuff, so I didn't want to have to go all the way back. The wall looks sort of weird/stupid too. It was originally going to be made of dirt and rock, but then I thought about it and remembered that since Lefeka summoned it it's technically magic so it should be green. I'm not sure whether that was a good idea, but it'd probably look worse if I drew it.
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