End chapter two. What, you say? Chapter two? When did chapter one end and chapter two start? Well, see, I decided last week that my chapters were way too long and needed splitting. So I did so. But of course chapter one was already almost over comic-wise. So I inserted the cover page for chapter two after page 26 and changed all the pages to say "Ch. 1 - Friends" or "Ch. 2 - Foes." Because that's what they're called now. Let me know if you see any inconsistencies.
Oh noes! What are they going to do to Xeari? However will Vark and Leanael save her? Is anyone going to die? Will they all survive, and just keep fighting over her? It's fun to ask questions to which you know the answers. :D
OMG can you believe it? There's a BACKGROUND! Backgrounds are rather tedious, though. This one wasn't all that bad since it was simple and repetitive, but anything harder would take AGES. Hmm, maybe I should make a tiny bit more effort to backgroundize my comic… >.>
Let's see. Panel three was very confusing with Lefeka's wings there. Lefeka's wings in general, actually, are annoying. Like the last panel. Though it looks cool, it could probably look better if… well, if I was more skilled. I think Ciaran's wings look cool there, though.
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