It took me a while to name this page. It used to be "Still Fighting," but that didn't emphasize what I wanted. I just named it that because I didn't have a clue what to call it before.
Wah~ Drawing people small is hard. T.T The angle in panel two is really weird…
Man I had issues with panel five. I originally had it planned out so it would be at a three-quarter view, but I had a lot of trouble drawing it. I had to redo the panel so many times x.x But I think it's pretty good as it is now.
Ooh. I didn't even realize this until my friend pointed it out. I showed my friends the pencil version of this page. It's a bit messy and sketchy, so said friend looked at it for a while, then winced and handed it back. I was like, "Um, what?" and she was all, "In the fifth panel… she's drawing her nails against the ground…" and I was all, "Oh. Oh, yeah. Whoops, sorry." :P It's like the nails-on-a-chalkboard thing. I'm one of those people who reacts negatively to it. Apparently it's an instinct thing because our caveman ancestors would do it on rock to signal danger and whatnot, and we learned to be very afraid. But, um, sorry to anyone who reacts like that to this page. Leanael's just trying to stop skidding, 'cause I bet it hurts her feet. x.x
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