Note: I toned and shaded page 74, so go back to see the updated version. I'll be toning and shading from now on. I sped through chapter 3 and now that the story is going somewhere (kinda) I feel like it's time to get back to the art. I feel kinda bad for choosing quantity over quality, but now said quality is better from practice and time. So I'll make up for it now. =3
A Friday update, yay!
I accidentally scanned this larger than usual, so it might look a little less consistent with the other pages than my usual… inconsistency.
Commenting on panels, I like panels one and three, as well as the last one: 1 for the camera placement, 3 for the effect, and the last for the change. I'm trying to be more creative with my panelling lately because I find it to be so boring to begin with. Panel 2 is supposed to be Vark's closed eye and what he's imagining, but I think I just barely pulled it off, if at all.
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