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Star Strip page 50

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on Dec. 7, 2014

Page fifty of actual content which nearly coincides with the party for my fiftieth birthday yesterday. Jen gives her little pep talk to the women who'll be leading the way and Lon shows a slightly darker side.

The massive rewrite is done and the script ballooned out to 40 pages but it flows better. The reader must realize that a lot of this is happening quickly and often at the same time. I wish I oculd do a better job of showing that but it is something I'm working on.