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Star Strip page 58

bravo1102

on Dec. 25, 2014

Lon realizes he does have a robofemoid; Jenny! And Jen notices Aura being lazy. They're going to take the ship afterall and not have to start the plan all over again. Aura's a bit inexperienced and was at a loss. And lounging on the floor just seemed like such a good idea. 

The buffer is down to ten pages which is still three weeks. I finally hashed out the ending as I had some characters coming and going and being places where they really shouldn't be. There were some sequence problems as scenes written seperately didn't flow in the sequence as written. So copy and paste and move around. The script has ballooned to 39 pages but at 68 pages of comic I'm on page 24. There is hope. I condensed a bunch of scenes but still the script got longer because I explained things in greater detail.