Author notes

Star Strip page 83

bravo1102

on March 29, 2015

Thank you KimLuster for nailing it.  The tone does vary as does the pacing. It's supposed to be zany meets serious. I was trying to make the characters different in tone and the universe consistent. And the universe is a weird nonsensical place.  I think it could be that I went in too many directions at once.

I have given thought to going with a quick action ending just winding everything up with a big fight.