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Star Strip page 103

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on June 7, 2015

So where could Frank and Jill get some robofemoids?  This story is going to reveal some bits behind "why?" Bob came up with them.  I have written a script with Bob about how he got the idea so this is carrying on from that.
And Rickover, Spock and Master Chief Kili Gowen are gonna see what Da-tu has been doing with the crew. In one place I called the Master Chief Kili and another Gowen so I put the two together. Kili is from The Hobbit and before that Teutonic mythology. Gowen is my old First Sergeant's name.  

Production is at page 109 so there is still a buffer.  I just finished a massive overhaul of the ending describing how some things happen as opposed to simple stage directions of "X happens"  THe original ending was kind of lame so it got spiced up a bit.  A lot has got to happen to wind this up and the script was relatively brief.  But as there as plenty of spear carriers around, Rickover could just say "You and you do that, you do something else" and it'll happen off-stage.