Tales of the disturbed one Chapter 1 Source of the sickness

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#2 Memories of madness

messenjah

on Oct. 20, 2006

i have taken into account the critiques i have had from both this page and my friends on other websites such as differenciating between narrative monolog, dialog and voices inside the characters head

also ive added more background to cover up the use of graph paper that seems to make people unhappy

truth is i just dont have the time to do it on normal paper and measure out of the lines and stuff

anyways enjoy