The Adept

p.46 "Goodbye"

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p.46 "Goodbye"

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I'm not so sure about the dialog here. I had to move text around to fit unto the panels. Then again, there's always those pages that don't work as well as others.

I'm obviously guessing Midori's "Lover" comment is just her imagination (considering she's only 10-12 inches tall). Or maybe it's just her natural reaction to keep other women away from Coridan.

This is actually the first page to mention Midori or Coridan's names. I originally didn't include them thinking it wasn't important yet (and that with all the confusion it was unlikely either Erica or Melkior would find out), but it probably has gone on a little too long.

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