The Battery Story

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battery 2-4

Matchhead1984

on Dec. 3, 2007

Just edited the last two pages. The word placement in storytelling is very important. It creates the timing and how the panel will be looked at. Stan Lee said that he spent more time figuring out where to place the words than writing them.
This part of the story was written by my brother with interpretation by me ( I was writing it down and editing.) Please comment on the storytelling, if the two stories intergrate fine and also the overall feel of it. Thanks