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darrell

on April 26, 2011

I had a bit more dialogue planned for this page but then I thought it just cluttered it. I don't do a lot of action so maybe leave what I do have stand out on its own. And even the fight was planned differently at first, I had thought about having "Blue" hide behind a car and do some other stuff but the more I tried to choreograph the fight the more I thought it just made more sense for him to dive in.