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Master Mummy - Page 4

darrell

on June 13, 2011

Yeah, this was one of the easier pages of this storyline to draw. I wasn't sure if the visual of being tossed through the building would work (but I thought the sound effects might help) so let me know what you think of it. And as you can see I've added word balloons so we can see what he's hearing. I wasn't sure how I wanted those balloons to look, to stand out. Perhaps I should have done squigly balloons pointing from his ear though.

Not much else to say on this one. Overall though I'm starting to wonder about the amount of action. I may be compensating for my last webcomic that wasn't big on the action by filling this comic with it. But I like to think once the dialog gets added on top of it there is a story building. The next storyline after this will be a bit more talky talky (with some action). Just to tease it a bit I'll say one word… "flashback."

Locoma – Glad you're enjoying it. It's been really fun to make.

ghostrunner and Legend Comics – When I first laid out this page I thought that would be the boring panel and was tempted to reduce it in size or something. Once I started drawing it though I started to realize it was going to be a really good panel and feeds well into the next.

shastab24 – If this page is any indication he may not fare too well. But we'll see. ;)

I am Candyman – Thanks!

Thanks for reading!